A Sense of Sin
To lose a sense of sin may be
the greatest want.
The blooming actor who misses
her marks unaware is forgiven,
there will be another take.
Yet in that scene the play was pained
for someone or something on
that local horizon needed her and she was not there. If she is serious she senses this and rehearses to becomes a better noticer of detail. If she is not serious she unbecomes.
that local horizon needed her and she was not there. If she is serious she senses this and rehearses to becomes a better noticer of detail. If she is not serious she unbecomes.
“Becoming a better noticer.” Yes, that’s it. The closer I get to Jesus the more often I see where I fall short and the quicker I come to repentance. Keeping short tabs has taken a very long time.
Well put, sir.
“If she is serious she senses this” Yes.
1. “Becoming a better notice” is the pathway to becoming a mystic.
2. “The play was pained for someone or something”––and my deepest hell has been when I knew I was responsible for the pain of others.
3. “She was not there” and “she unbecomes” is both a beautiful parallelism and a tragic reality.
4. Thank you once again. You skillfully play the strings of the human heart.
Oops! “Noticer”
Very nice! Thanks!
a) this is lovely
b) I miss your words more than you know. You show me God in a way that is like water to me. Thank you.
Ouch. I have left too much neglected. This was such a word “in season”, and one of your most demanding poems.” Please keep the words coming — they are bread.